Ooooh, nicely done!! I just love it. But then, I always love your writing. You are truly evil though, the way you end chapters just when the getting is good!
I love the way you are able to convey so much exposition without making it sound like you're just getting it out of the way. It's always *important* and you give just the right amount of information to draw us in, and commit us, without over-explaining. It's really good!
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Date: 2007-03-05 03:38 pm (UTC)I love the way you are able to convey so much exposition without making it sound like you're just getting it out of the way. It's always *important* and you give just the right amount of information to draw us in, and commit us, without over-explaining. It's really good!
I can't wait to see where this one goes. *hugs*