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innerslytherin ([personal profile] innerslytherin) wrote2007-01-18 12:54 pm

Belated Birthday Ficlet for [profile] nqdonne

This is very late, but I'm slowly catching up on the outstanding ficlets.


Something to Remember
Snupin
Wc: 893
Rating: Hard R at least


For [livejournal.com profile] nqdonne...Um, this is more of a birthday ficlet, but the prompt ran away with me. *grin*  I'm not sure if this really counts as hatesex, but I got the rest of your request, I think. ^_~


Something to Remember


"What are you doing here?" hissed a voice.  Remus turned slowly, trying to keep from startling Snape.

"Looking for you, of course."

"Well, you've found yourself a hexing if you don't get out of Slytherin territory, werewolf."

Remus' head snapped up and he glared at Snape.  "Don't say that so loud!" he hissed.

Snape was smirking.  "So that's what it looks like when a werewolf is frightened."

"Shut it!" Remus ordered, trying to keep his voice level.  Bloody hell.  He could keep his cool about anything else, but if Snape was going to threaten to expose his secret--

Snape gave a low, delighted laugh.  It was the first time Remus had ever heard him laugh, and even though it was at his expense, even though it was obvious Snape was enjoying the power he had over Remus, the sound sent a thrill straight to Remus' groin.  God, what he wouldn't give to make Snape laugh for other reasons!

"You're wasting your time down here, werewolf.  I had to promise Dumbledore, but there will come a day when the headmaster has no power over me.  Remember that."

Remus met his gaze, feeling something go cold inside him.  They would be leaving school in only a few short months.  "Then maybe I should get my own hold over you," he breathed, and leaned in very close.

"What--"  Snape cut himself off before the question got all the way out.  He raised his hands, one still gripping his wand, and shoved Remus away.

That is, he tried to shove Remus away.  There were advantages to being a werewolf, after all; he was stronger than he looked.  Remus leaned against his hands, forcing his elbows to bend so they were mere inches apart.

"What's wrong, Snape?" he breathed.  "Don't like being this close to a Dark creature?"  He paused for effect, then added, "Or is it that you like it too much?"

Snape's eyes went wide, and Remus felt another thrill as he detected the scent of arousal--and not all of it was his own.  "I'll bloody kill you," Snape said, but he was breathless.

"I'm sure you will someday," Remus said.  "I know how well you hold a grudge.  It's why I'm done apologising to you.  I know it will never work."  He smirked at Severus.  "I'll try something else, instead."

He leaned down and kissed Severus.

It was a hard kiss, a demanding kiss, but Snape responded immediately, parting his lips, his tongue meeting Remus'.  Remus lifted a hand to cradle the back of Snape's head, not bothering to bridle his desire.

Snape bit him.

When Remus pulled away, gasping, Snape's hands curled around his robes and tugged him backwards until Snape's back hit the wall.  Remus groaned softly and leaned into him, pressing a suddenly insistent erection into Snape's hip.  His body was trembling; he wondered if Snape felt the inevitability of this as strongly as he did.

Snape's hands were fumbling at his trousers.  Remus didn't stop kissing him, liking the feel of having Severus Snape surrender to him.  Then Snape's hand was around his cock and oh God! that felt brilliant.  He moaned into the kiss and pressed his hips against Severus' hand.

Snape broke the kiss.  "Touch me, you bastard!"

Remus laughed, he couldn't help it, but he obeyed, sliding one hand down to cup Snape's arse while the other undid his zip.  In moments they were both squeezing and stroking, writhing their hips against each other.

Gasping, Remus lowered his head to kiss Snape again, but all he got was an ear.  A moment later he felt a nip at his shoulder through his shirt.  He gasped and bit his lip to keep from making too much noise.  Snape's hands were clever.  Remus tasted blood when he came.

He stroked Snape's cock faster, twisting his hand and squeezing.  Before long Snape was bucking into his hand and biting Remus' shoulder hard to keep from crying out.  Slowly they went still, except for the heaving of chests.  Remus leaned into Snape, trying not to like the warmth but unable to wish--

No.  He straightened finally and deliberately lifted his hand to taste Severus.  He held Snape's gaze as he did, and Snape swallowed audibly at the sight.  Then Remus leaned in and kissed him hard, wishing he could exorcise the last of his desire.  Snape gave as good as he got, one hand reaching up to tug at Remus' overlong hair.

Finally he pulled away and looked down at Snape.  The Slytherin was sprawled against the wall, trousers open, tie askew, eyes dazed, cheeks pink and lips swollen from kisses.  God, he looked delicious.  Remus swallowed to wet his dry mouth and stepped back slowly, tucking himself back into his trousers.

"Just remember this, if you ever feel like telling anyone my secrets," he muttered finally.  It hurt to say.

Snape's eyes shuttered, though he didn't draw himself up or change position.  "I'll remember we both enjoyed it," he retorted, though his usual bitter tones were more languid than Remus had ever heard them.  "And you came first."

Remus flicked his wand in a cleaning charm over both of them and straightened his tie.  "Severus," he said crisply.  Then he forced himself to turn his back and walk away.

He missed the look of longing that fleeted across the other boy's face.

[identity profile] inkgeist.livejournal.com 2007-01-18 07:13 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh no! Poor Severus! Okay so he was being a bastard and then continues to be a bastard later, but perhaps it would not have been so if Remus hadnt missed that look of longing...

[identity profile] inkgeist.livejournal.com 2007-01-28 08:45 pm (UTC)(link)
Its all good :) This fic is beautiful - and the perfect example of why I try, yet cant resist reading school-aged Snupin; I personally think - oh no, all that time wasted! Because you know they are going to end up together in the end ;)

[identity profile] thesnapelyone.livejournal.com 2007-01-19 04:00 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, yum. Rowr.

That's about all I'm good for just now.

[identity profile] noorie.livejournal.com 2007-01-19 08:21 am (UTC)(link)
mmm, yes. and snape!!! you've worked in a lot of characterization and atmosphere along with the smut, particularly for such a short fic.

[identity profile] imkalena.livejournal.com 2007-01-21 06:35 pm (UTC)(link)
Yes! Go, Remus! Quit apologizing and start fucking!
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[personal profile] busaikko 2007-01-22 05:13 am (UTC)(link)
Oooh! Mmmm. Ar! Ow....

So hot and desperate and sad --

[identity profile] nqdonne.livejournal.com 2007-01-27 10:43 am (UTC)(link)
OMG SO AWESOME!!!!! SQUEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!

Srsly, I am so ridiculously pleased! That was awesome! And you totally nailed hate!sex, since I like mine with a serious dash of UST anyway :D Sorry I didn't read and comment earlier, I've been terribly busy and this is the first fic I've read in at least a week.

Man, now I want more ;)

[identity profile] rakina.livejournal.com 2007-01-28 01:06 am (UTC)(link)
So nice! that final 'look of longing' is a sweet touch.
And Snape saying 'you came first'; such a face-saving Slytherin, bless him!

[identity profile] islandsmoke.livejournal.com 2007-01-28 01:29 pm (UTC)(link)
Delicious!

[identity profile] schemingreader.livejournal.com 2007-03-13 05:44 pm (UTC)(link)
Hey! I missed this the first time around. Hot stuff! I too like the line "You came first"--also, "touch me you bastard"--of course Remus has to laugh at that!

[identity profile] stoicstella.livejournal.com 2007-04-18 11:09 pm (UTC)(link)
A great little ficlet! I really like this sort of story where the characters are well developed. Porno with a bit of plot, yes?

I liked Severus' last response especially.
"I'll remember we both enjoyed it, and you came first."

Great stuff.