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innerslytherin ([personal profile] innerslytherin) wrote 2006-08-04 09:07 pm (UTC)

*sigh* Yes, it should. This has been a chapter RIDDLED with mistakes! I'm glad you enjoyed the image of Severus and the child (I tend to forget sometimes that as Head of House he likely has to deal with all sorts of children).

And here's your very own mistake-catching-drabble:

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“Em. Perhaps we should have turned left at that stile.” Remus shifted the map around, frowning.

“Idiotic Gryffindor! We’ll never finish the assignment now!”

Remus glanced sideways at his walking partner, wishing he’d got anyone but the snarky Slytherin who hated all Remus’ mates.

“Right. We’ll just backtrack and turn the other way.”

“This walk about the Forbidden Forest should have been over an hour ago!”

Remus grinned suddenly. “We could always cut through the forest.”

“Are you mad! There are werewolves in there…oh.”

Remus laughed at Snape’s sour expression. “And here I thought you’d never forget.”

Severus just glared.

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