Loved this chapter - - loved Wolfsbane in Sev's pocket, loved sleepy Remus, loved "I'll wear my Wellies", loved this:

Then another combination of lightning and thunder assaults them and the child is quite suddenly attached to Severus’ knees. Alarmed, he tires to shake it off, but it is as tenacious as Wolfsbane and when he reaches down to pry it off, he only ends up with it attached to his arms instead of his legs. Dear mother of Merlin I hate children, he thinks, and props it gingerly on his hip. (um, "tires" should be "tries", right?),

loved Severus comforting the kid anyway. And it's time Severus got some recognition, not that he wants it.