Squee! I'm so glad you like it! I honestly felt like Remus was just sort of dictating to me. This was one of those charmed fics that happened start to finish in the course of one day, and that hasn't happened to me in ages. I would recommend the film, just because it's a fun and original sort of comedy take on film noir (in my uneducated-about-movies opinion). But anyway, I'm really glad you like this! ^__^