Excellent! You've really captured Emily's fear and let her play out the possibilities.
I find Doyle fascinating, so far. What unnerved me, though, was that he knew what Penelope/Derek and Dave/Ashley were doing at that moment *and they were all at the office!* You can't get any more secure than Quantico, yet Ian knew exactly what they were doing. That implies he could get to them at any moment. *That's* frightening.
I still hope there's a twist to this storyline and Doyle is not just a relentless Terminator. (Already did that with Foyet) I'd love to see Sean, Clyde, or Tsia be Ian's partner (the one he spoke to on the phone as 'Lauren' was arrested 7 years ago). He's clearly upset at Emily because she "took the only thing that mattered to" him -- Lauren. My guess, anyway. He loved her and Emily 'killed' her. He wants 'Lauren' back or he wants Emily dead. Her choice. She may leave with Ian to save her friends.
Ian Doyle
I find Doyle fascinating, so far. What unnerved me, though, was that he knew what Penelope/Derek and Dave/Ashley were doing at that moment *and they were all at the office!* You can't get any more secure than Quantico, yet Ian knew exactly what they were doing. That implies he could get to them at any moment. *That's* frightening.
I still hope there's a twist to this storyline and Doyle is not just a relentless Terminator. (Already did that with Foyet) I'd love to see Sean, Clyde, or Tsia be Ian's partner (the one he spoke to on the phone as 'Lauren' was arrested 7 years ago). He's clearly upset at Emily because she "took the only thing that mattered to" him -- Lauren. My guess, anyway. He loved her and Emily 'killed' her. He wants 'Lauren' back or he wants Emily dead. Her choice. She may leave with Ian to save her friends.
Possibly. ;)
Kathy